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PropellerHeadCase
05-05-2007, 08:47 PM
No offence to Ian but the Conclusion in the booking guide needs a serious re-write. Run-on sentences are hard to read and each paragraph seems to be a series of run-on sentences. Too many joiners, i.e. 'and' or '&', and the ampersand (&) is used to replace the word (and) way too much.
Harrison's Discos
05-05-2007, 09:02 PM
No offence to Ian but the Conclusion in the booking guide needs a serious re-write. Run-on sentences are hard to read and each paragraph seems to be a series of run-on sentences. Too many joiners, i.e. 'and' or '&', and the ampersand (&) is used to replace the word (and) way too much.
Just mentioning the ''&'' word doesn't sound that professional.
Corabar Steve
07-05-2007, 08:19 AM
I wouldn't worry about that too much, a new & improved version is in the pipeline.
PropellerHeadCase
07-05-2007, 10:51 PM
Spot on ;)
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