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[JAMdisco]

My listing currently reads as below:-

Mobile disco available for weddings / functions / birthdays. All enquiries seriously considered. I have a full 2000W Mackie sound system and proffesional audio / lighting equipment. Also, all equipment is PAT tested and I carry public liability for £10,000,000 Prices vary on function / distance / play time. Contact me for details

Could it be changed to read:-

Mobile disco available for weddings / functions / birthdays. All enquiries seriously considered. We use the latest in digital audio and LED lighting. As safety is of high importance, all equipment is PAT tested and carry public liability insurance for your peace of mind. Prices start from as little as £120 although can vary on function / distance / play time. Please ring or email for details.



Thanks.

[Penfold42]

My listing currently reads as below:-

Mobile disco available for weddings / functions / birthdays. All enquiries seriously considered. I have a full 2000W Mackie sound system and proffesional audio / lighting equipment. Also, all equipment is PAT tested and I carry public liability for £10,000,000 Prices vary on function / distance / play time. Contact me for details

Could it be changed to read:-

Mobile disco available for weddings / functions / birthdays. All enquiries seriously considered. We use the latest in digital audio and LED lighting. As safety is of high importance, all equipment is PAT tested and carry public liability insurance for your peace of mind. Prices start from as little as £120 although can vary on function / distance / play time. Please ring or email for details.



Thanks.

Like the second one......but........."All enquiries seriously considered"....i would lose that...give's the wrong impression. IMO

"All funtions covered"

[Solitaire Events Ltd]

Send an changes or ammendments to [email protected] please and I will do them in due course.