Has anyone got any advice on how to make my webpage better. Needs improvement(i think)
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Has anyone got any advice on how to make my webpage better. Needs improvement(i think)
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Hi idisco,Originally Posted by idisco
On your home page, there is a mixture of the words "I" & "we" when describing what you do. I would decide on one OR the other & stick with it.
Your pricing page says a mobile disco with lights, bubble machine & balloons is £50. Is this correct? If so, I don't see how you can make a profit. Also, what type of work do you think this will attract? Just something to think about.
On the policies page, the second paragraph has spelling errors with the words "decrease", "apologise" & "inconvenience" and the third paragraph should start with a capital letter.
Also, the phrase "It is not our problem if a guest injures themselves" doesn't sound too good. I'd change "It is not our problem..." to something like "we will not be liable"
You also state "We have no equipment which can cause injuries" which I think you should delete, as I don't think it's true. Couldn't someone trip on any of your gear, for example?
On your contact page, I would add an actual email link as well as a phone number, preferably a landline.
On the gallery page, I think you should remove the pictures of the equipment you use & replace them with pics of people dancing & enjoying themselves at your gigs.
Finally, I feel that some of your wording & phrasing needs looking at, as it could do with a bit of improvement in places to make it clearer / more business like.
Hope this helps.
Last edited by rob1963; 13-10-2008 at 06:40 PM.
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Hya mate, do you have any specific questions/ideas in mind?
Don’t take this the wrong way;
One quick point, is the review on the bottom from a legitimate person?
Our Latest Customer Reviews
5.0 out of 5
It was the best party i ever had all thanks to idisco.
Jonh Smith - 11 October 2008
Don't go around saying the world owes you a living. The world owes you nothing.
It was here first.
I guess not
I do know a John Smiths
Don't go around saying the world owes you a living. The world owes you nothing.
It was here first.
Come on folks...let's give idiscos some help here!
Well I was giving a subtle hint, POSSIBLE fake comments can put people off.
I can’t say much more it's a nice simple website, easy to navigate, gallery needs improving BUT pictures can be added after various gigs.
Just remember to KISS
Keep
It
Simple
Stupid
Don't go around saying the world owes you a living. The world owes you nothing.
It was here first.
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