Looks good Callum, cant find anything that hasnt been said.
Just one thing (and i dont want to question how you do things), but, i think, an over time rate of "per half hour" instead of hourly would be more benificial. I started off with hourly at £20 and changed it to £10 per half hour, you'll be surprised how many people have gone for that extra halp hour, whilst the hour whould have been too long.
On PA Hire page: -
Should be: -Our new PA package can be sued for any purpose. From shop openings to a prize giving!
The package conisits of 2 Mackie SRM 450 Active speakers, Two wireless microphones and if required a connection for a music player (iPod, MP3 Player CD Player etc) More Microphones can be added if required.
Our new PA package can be used for any purpose, from shop openings to a prize giving!
The package consists of two Mackie SRM 450 Active speakers, two wireless microphones and, if required, a connection for a music player (iPod, MP3 Player, CD Player etc). More microphones can be added if required.
The site looks good but as mentioned above, hceck yoru spellinge
Larry Basham
Can you play something with a beat ?
I'm no grammatical genius, but my English teacher told me, when I was at school, that you should never, ever, ever, ever put a 'comma' after 'and'.The package consists of two Mackie SRM 450 Active speakers, two wireless microphones and, if required, a connection for a music player (iPod, MP3 Player, CD Player etc) More microphones can be added if required
Is this true?
Well, in any text like that quoted I would always put the "if required" between commas, meaning the whole sentence could be read without the conditional clause and still make perfect sense.
Going by the quotes here it seems it's OK to do so in these cases...
i seen this
Soft drinks will be provided by the client for the DJ and DJs assistant for the duration of the performance.
does this mean they have to give you soft drink all night free ??