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    I really like that. I especially like the Uplighting photos and I am sure that they will do really well for you. I'd maybe think about having one of those photos on your front page? (Yes, I think that they are that good).

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    Quote Originally Posted by DJWilson View Post
    Looks nice and welcoming, the only thing that didnt look suited was the tagcloud, although i like the %'s of 'disco' or whatever, it doesnt look right just sat there IMO.
    I kind of like the tag cloud...and Marcs changed it to match the colourscheme. That mans awesome...i didnt even have to ask...i thought it...and it was done....now weres my swedish blonde

    Quote Originally Posted by yourdj View Post
    Really nice!

    One thing i would ask is that there are loads of testimonials and not many pictures from gigs? I used istock when i set up my first site as i had no mobile pics.

    Other wise great!
    Hopefull thats gonna change now that ive got a DSLR and finally got half an idea on how to use it.

    Quote Originally Posted by shakermaker View Post
    I really like that. I especially like the Uplighting photos and I am sure that they will do really well for you. I'd maybe think about having one of those photos on your front page? (Yes, I think that they are that good).
    Cheers Gary. Im planning on having 1 uplighting pic and 1 disco crowd pic on the front. But thoughtr i would hold off untill i have the disco pic i want
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dynamic Entertainment View Post
    I kind of like the tag cloud...and Marcs changed it to match the colourscheme. That mans awesome...i didnt even have to ask...i thought it...and it was done....now weres my swedish blonde
    Pro-active continuous quality improvement is all part of the service

    On that subject, the swedish blonde you ordered arrived but failed my rigorous (and there were a lot - I had to make sure) quality tests so she has been sent back

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marc J View Post
    Pro-active continuous quality improvement is all part of the service

    On that subject, the swedish blonde you ordered arrived but failed my rigorous (and there were a lot - I had to make sure) quality tests so she has been sent back
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    Quote Originally Posted by Marc J View Post
    On that subject, the swedish blonde you ordered arrived but failed my rigorous (and there were a lot - I had to make sure) quality tests so she has been sent back

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    Nice Clean, easy, etc etc. Nice bit of keyword stuffing in the bottom left pane - make sure you change that from page to page otherwise Google will penalise you for it.

    By the way, on http://www.dynamic-entertainment.co....le-discos.html you've got "fore" instead of "for" in "for more details" in each case.

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    Cheers Jules
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    Quote Originally Posted by DJ Jules View Post
    Nice Clean, easy, etc etc. Nice bit of keyword stuffing in the bottom left pane - make sure you change that from page to page otherwise Google will penalise you for it.
    The tag cloud is generated automatically from the content across the site, and will change whenever content is updated, but it is the same on every page.

    Although it's such a small area of the page, with a maximum of 40 words, that it's safe to assume Google will not penalise for duplicate content. Sites usually have common headers / footers / code chunks and to penalise for this would be a little OTT, imho.

    Quote Originally Posted by DJ Jules View Post
    By the way, on http://www.dynamic-entertainment.co....le-discos.html you've got "fore" instead of "for" in "for more details" in each case.
    Fixed

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marc J View Post
    Fixed
    Next ones a brunette....dont send her packing eh
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    The general design of your site looks good, however, there are many inconsistencies in Grammar, Tense, Capitalisation and Punctuation, I'm surprised Rob hasn't picked up on this
    I've highlighted some of the more obvious instances, but many more remain, I've also rewritten the script of one of the paragraphs. Feel free to use it (or not) if you wish.


    Dynamic Entertainment started 9 years ago, providing Mobile Discos throughout West Cumbria. Since that time, expanded and evolved to now provide a whole range of services, including Venue Mood Lighting, and we now also supply specialist DJs to pubs and night clubs throughout the North West.

    In those 9 nine years of experience; we have supplied Mobile Discos for many different events: weddings, christenings, birthday parties, corporate events and proms, to name a few. In addition to that most of our DJ’s have worked, not only in the Mobile Disco industry, but also in pubs and nightclubs. Please rest assured that even though we run a DJ Agency as part of our business, your Mobile Disco will be ran run by a “Mobile DJ” and not a Club DJ. We firmly believe that a good club/pub DJ does not necessarily make a good Mobile DJ!

    Even with all our additional services, our core business had remained, and will continue to remain, in supplying Wedding discos. That said, we are available for any function or event you may be considering, and will guarantee to provide the same level of service regardless of the reason for the celebration.


    Dynamic Entertainment was established nine years ago, and has provided mobile discos throughout West Cumbria ever since. During this time we have expanded, evolved and now offer a whole range of services including Mood Lighting your venue, and the supply of specialist DJs to nightclubs, hotels and bars throughout the North West. (sounds more upmarket)
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