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    Ok.... I've made some changes with agreement by the client..... based on some of your comments.

    Unfortunately he doesn't want to change the background image... however with regards to the accordian menu on the right hand side we've updated it to give a brief description before the " Click Here "

    Also made a few tweaks to some of the articles

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    Quote Originally Posted by AlexEntertainment View Post

    It SHOULD read.... " Party killing silences between songs (ie a DJ who can not mix) ".... and not what you've seen.
    Hey Alex - looks good

    Surely it should be "cannot" not "can not".

    Also "Full public liability and insurance" - what?

    Cheers, Paul

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    £2000,000 public liability and insurance

    Maybe £2,000,000 would look better?

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    Also ...

    The picture for Proper Music Proper Mixing is turntables - surely Sunny is a Vestax controller DJ?
    Plus no original photos that I can see - certainly none of Sunny which is a real shame.

    Having said all that, you may yet give Toby a run for his money.
    Good work fella

    Cheers, Paul.

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    Hi mate. I think overall its not to bad.But does need better pictures on there thou

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    totally agree with pictures.... we are currently working on it and have a plan to have some decent and personal pictures on very very soon

    Paul.... sunny laughed so hard when you mentioned the Vestax (He said " In my defence, I did start with real turn tables! " hehehehe )
    I'm working getting sunny some personal portfolio pictures of him and his gigs... but he's camara shy! LOL

    Thanks for the spelling pick ups.... going to re-read everything tonight to go over the checks!

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    Spelling and grammar mistake in the top banner !

    Quality Wedding and Party DJ's for unfrgettable events

    DJ's - (Apostrophe s) denotes ownership. They are the DJ's speakers.

    DJs - (s on it's own) denotes plural. There are several DJs.

    And then you have missed an 'o' from the word unforgettable.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Paul The Party Dj View Post
    Plus no original photos that I can see - certainly none of Sunny which is a real shame.

    Having said all that, you may yet give Toby a run for his money.
    Hope not - I wont have a DJ for Balmer if he does

    Quote Originally Posted by AlexEntertainment View Post
    I'm working getting sunny some personal portfolio pictures but he's camara shy! LOL
    Here you go

    Your DJ - Mobile DJ The New Forest, Southampton & Hampshire. Toby
    https://yourdj.co.uk/

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    This ones good too :

    Your DJ - Mobile DJ The New Forest, Southampton & Hampshire. Toby
    https://yourdj.co.uk/

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