My new website

[DJ Paulie]

Still have to add more content and fix the spelling mistakes and menu, but what do you think ?

http://discoroyale.rydalweb.co.uk/

[Dynamic Entertainment]

First thing....get a proper domain and loose the adverts

I would also loose the Name and Slogan on the right hand side...you already have it in the logo...no need for it again IMO.

[DJ Paulie]

I have my own domain the guy who designed it uploaded it there to show me what it was like. I thought having the name & tagline on the right filled it out a bit. Also acts as a hyperlink. And yes when it's transferred to my domain the ads will be going, I block them with adblock pro anyway !

[DeckstarDeluxe]

Not keen on that at all, nor all the red.

Like I said before, hire a pro

[Booche]

Theres a few things that i can pick out

1: The red is very weird on the eyes (unless its just me)
2: The love heart icon
3: Page names on the top of the page
4: As mentioed the google ad's and the web name
5: T&C's just says "Terms and" on my screen
6: The tabs look weird being all rounded on the left hand side and straight at the other end, doesn't seem to flow
7: Theres no images on any of the pages its just Text, Text and more Text

[DJ Paulie]

well I thought it was a start, maybe I'll tweak it more when it's finished and play with different headers/colour schemes. Thanks booche, as I said it's not the final product, just thought would show how it's going before finishing.

[Jiggles]

The body font is really tacky imo. The feel of it still screams cheap!

[yourdj]

Looks alright I think. Nice use of three colours.

adverts make it look like youtube or something.
The picture of you will do no favours - get some from a photographer on first dance with you in the background - that is always a fav as the client imagines that thats them.

Get more of your gigs too or istock it for now. Buy some more lights

good work and much better than before so thats a step forward

[discomobiledj]

I assume your friend is not a professional?

Problems I found:

Text made bigger to fill out the site
Multiple coloured text
Two menus
Different fonts
More pictures needed, if you haven't got anymore then remove it until you do.
Main menu should be centered
Testimonial page blank.

On your T & C page you have:

"Cheques will only be accepted by arrangement BEFORE the date of the event. This is for your peace of mind as well as mine."

You need to state a date (ie 14 days before) as I could pay you the night before then cancel the cheque.

[Charlie Brown]

I'm really really sorry but it doesn't do it for me. It shouts ameatur and home made.

Have you not looked into getting a professional?