New Website

[discojohnno]

Good Evening,

I am currently working on a new website for my mobile disco business and was wondering if you guys could take a look and offer some constructive criticism and advice, not everything is complete yet and i have had a little of from Alex getting DJEP implemented into the site

I am working on privacy policy and terms and conditions at the moment

Please browse and let me know what you think

http://discorevolution.co.uk

[Shaun]

Looks great. I like it.

[funkymook]

OK, I'm going to be a bit harsh - had a quick browse and the first thing that struck me was statements like:

'we offer the unique range of music spanning 50 years'

'Disco Revolution Entertainment is a company dedicated to changing the way people party for the better'

'I am determined to revolutionize the way we celebrate those occasions which mean so much to us, and will not give up until this happens.'

'different to all the other clichéd DJ’s out there'


I think you need to elaborate and justify these claims so people understand why you are so unique - there's nothing on there at the moment that isn't 'bog standard' to be honest. And if you have a unique range of music I'd love to see how it differs from from any other DJ's collection.

[discojohnno]

OK, I'm going to be a bit harsh - had a quick browse and the first thing that struck me was statements like:

'we offer the unique range of music spanning 50 years'

'Disco Revolution Entertainment is a company dedicated to changing the way people party for the better'

'I am determined to revolutionize the way we celebrate those occasions which mean so much to us, and will not give up until this happens.'

'different to all the other clichéd DJ’s out there'


I think you need to elaborate and justify these claims so people understand why you are so unique - there's nothing on there at the moment that isn't 'bog standard' to be honest. And if you have a unique range of music I'd love to see how it differs from from any other DJ's collection.

I would agree with this I'm still working on some of the wording and this will be changed

[discojohnno]

Any more opinions on website guys?

[discomobiledj]

The contact us tab is sitting under the menu bar, none of the icons at the top link to anything.

Not sure on the pink text you have on there.

[Matty12]

Hi there

Just a quick one: maybe, couldn't the coverage go under contact us.

Also who designed it?

[ppentertainments]

I like it - although I was first greeted to the site by a female sticking her tongue out at me - not very inviting

[Cowlinn]

The contact us tab is sitting under the menu bar, none of the icons at the top link to anything.

Not sure on the pink text you have on there.

Hi there

Just a quick one: maybe, couldn't the coverage go under contact us.

Also who designed it?

What bit are you talking about? Looks fine my end..

PS: Love the website, I'd also like to know who designed/developed it

[discojohnno]

cheers guys added some of the pics on there just to fill content, the site has been design by yoo theme and is a Joomla template i purchased there gold subscription, would definitely recommend these guys also once you have purchased you can change css etc, I'm pretty handy at graphic design and I am just getting into website design so find my self working from template to learn stuff