Wedding Flyer.... Thoughts please :)

[Ecstatic Events]

Hi Guys,

I've been meaning to get something together for a while and now the god forbids are back at school, I have a little spare time.

I've knocked up a Wedding flyer, but I need some brutal (always count on MDD for that) honesty. Does it look naff? Does it look too Amateur?

I AM FULLY AWARE some of our fellow posters are designers etc. Please dont come back with a "leave it to the professionals" type remark.

It's a first mock up and things will change. It's also very pixelated as a JPEG, the final versions will be PDF. I'm aware it looks naff.

It will be blindingly obvious to most - I created it in a well known microsoft program

[Cowlinn]

I think you forgot something

[Ecstatic Events]

I think you forgot something

Yes Indeed. What a plum

[funkymook]

Brutally honest - the layout looks like a junior school Valentines card project - it needs to be much more sophisticated to appeal to the wedding market.

And what's that 'from £999 package - raised eyebrows' about?

[ppentertainments]

Not turning this into a pricing thread, but I would imagine 99.9% of people wanting a dj would see the £999 bit and look elsewhere, make it £60 instead

Also your hearts - well don't look like hearts

I think as an initial idea it looks good, but you need to hire a , sorry not supposed to say that

[Shakermaker Promotions]

Am I the only one that can see that the £999.00 comment put on there is just for the forums benefit as in, it's just a laugh?

I think it looks pretty cheap (the flyer) to be honest Mike. I don't like the hearts at all. You can do much better than that mate.

[Ecstatic Events]

Brutally honest - the layout looks like a junior school Valentines card project - it needs to be much more sophisticated to appeal to the wedding market.

And what's that 'from £999 package - raised eyebrows' about?

I agree - Those pink "heart shaped" objects will be going. I'll try and have a go without them...

As for the £999 bit - poor attempt at humour it seems. If I were charging £999 for a Wedding a) would I be attempting to design a flyer myself b) Would it look like a junior school valentines card project???

Not turning this into a pricing thread, but I would imagine 99.9% of people wanting a dj would see the £999 bit and look elsewhere, make it £60 instead

Also your hearts - well don't look like hearts

I think as an initial idea it looks good, but you need to hire a , sorry not supposed to say that

I'm gonna have a play with it - It's an initial idea that took me (my daughter, cough cough) 15 mins to come up with, but thanks for your honesty. I'll post an updated design

I think it looks pretty cheap (the flyer) to be honest Mike. I don't like the hearts at all. You can do much better than that mate.

Better than nothing at all, It's a start - Im sure it will improve

[Solitaire Events Ltd]

It looks very amateur to me. Colours are wrong - layout is wrong.

It's screams home made to me. (apologies to your daughter...)

I would seriously speak to any of the designers on here Mike.

[Ecstatic Events]

It looks very amateur to me. Colours are wrong - layout is wrong.

It's screams home made to me. (apologies to your daughter...)

I would seriously speak to any of the designers on here Mike.

I have to agree - It looks crap - Why on earth did I post it after 15 mins of playing around? I designed it really - not my Daughter (but both of my daughters like it, no surprise as they are both in junior school - Lol)

I like to "have a bash" at these types of things myself, and sadly not earning enough to pay for design services.

I'm all over a "revised" edition - watch this space.

[Ecstatic Events]

Ding Ding - Round 2 - Any better, or should I just GIVE UP