Quote Originally Posted by yourdj View Post
A demo video or diagram might be an idea as its not completely clear.
Good idea... I might add some illustrative photos at the bottom of the text.

Quote Originally Posted by Excalibur View Post
Having had a more detailed read of the packages, I can see the differences, but they might well be clearer. Obviously the DJ and Disco is obvious, but the difference between Complete and Simple appears to be half an hour, and a hundred pounds, as both feature live music, as well as Disco. If you must have the two options, how about Standard and Premium, or such like? This might convey a reason for the price differential.
This is very true.
I need another think about how to best present the packages... in the meantime I've added a précis of what's included as the first bullet point for each example Hope it's clearer...

I've also reworded that paragraph about 80s pub DJs (ouch!) to convey the same idea less...priggishly. Thanks for mentioning this Funkymook...I'm cringing at the previous wording.

I'm stuck with the unclear pink text for now. :-/