Have tweaked my site!

[Spirits High]

Hi all,

Have been playing around with my site and given it a bit of a tweak

Comments and constructive critism would be appreciated

http://www.spiritshigh.org.uk

Now been spell and grammar checked!

so have a look now!

[BeerFunk]

If you're looking for ideas for improvement...

I'm not a fan of the 'flame' graphics on the home page, I think they look tacky and a bit 90's. More importantly - there are spelling and grammatical mistakes throughout. I'm not going to read through it and get every one for you, but there are 2 in here :

"We'll take away all the worry form wondering what the DJ will be like, so then the Bride & Groom can go of on honeymoon with great memories of the first day of their new life."

Not bad though

[soundtracker]

Agreed, run it through a spell and grammar check- it lets you down at the mo!

[Spirits High]

Points taken, now all sorted.

I hope!

[Shaun]

I agree with the point about removing the animated flame images. You have a nice funky looking site which is spoiled by the tacky animated gifs. Overall, very nice site.

[Spirits High]

The flames are there as I wanted something to break the page up a bit.

Any suggestions on how to liven the home page up, just think it looks a bit bland on it's own.

[Danno13]

You need some pictures from your gigs really. A couple of rig shots, but mainly pictures of people dancing and enjoying themselves.

[Spirits High]

danno, is your site done by you or someone build it for you?

Will wait to get more "opinions" until then the flames stay!

[Danno13]

I built mine myself

[soundtracker]

Write out one hundred times:

G - u -a - r - a- n - t - e - e -d

On my desk first thing tomorrow morning!!