The Booking Guide...

[PropellerHeadCase]

No offence to Ian but the Conclusion in the booking guide needs a serious re-write. Run-on sentences are hard to read and each paragraph seems to be a series of run-on sentences. Too many joiners, i.e. 'and' or '&', and the ampersand (&) is used to replace the word (and) way too much.

[Harrison's Discos]

No offence to Ian but the Conclusion in the booking guide needs a serious re-write. Run-on sentences are hard to read and each paragraph seems to be a series of run-on sentences. Too many joiners, i.e. 'and' or '&', and the ampersand (&) is used to replace the word (and) way too much.

Just mentioning the ''&'' word doesn't sound that professional.

[Corabar Steve]

I wouldn't worry about that too much, a new & improved version is in the pipeline.

[PropellerHeadCase]

Spot on