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[Dynamic Entertainment]

Hi Guys

Ive finally got round to ditching packages...*just waiting for the "told you so"s*...and i think the wordings ok, but a fresh pair of eyes wont go amiss.

http://www.dynamic-entertainment.co....le-discos.html

Thanks guys.

[discomobiledj]

We started off providing mobile discos, and even after all this time, we haven’t lost sight of the fact that Discos are our core business, and 100% commitment to customer care has remained our main priority.

All of our DJ's carry a wide selection of popular music, from the 1960's right up to the latest chart, and advanced promotional*comma removed* releases

I'd actually lay it out slightly differently....

We are continually striving to keep up-to-date with the marketplace, and only use top quality disco lighting, coupled with a powerful, crystal clear, sound system.

We realise that each event and venue is different, so we work with you and your venue to provide a bespoke disco, perfectly suited to your requirements.

We understand that an 18th may require an bass rumbling sound system, and laser lighting...but a 60th usually won't! In the same way, we realise that some venues may be able to provide us with all the space we need to set up a mobile nightclub, whereas in others, space is at a premium!

All of our DJ's carry a wide selection of popular music, from the 1960's right up to the latest chart, and advanced promotional releases, which will cater for most tastes.

We can also provide specialist music if this is mentioned at the time of booking. Our DJ's are all able to select the most suitable music for your guests and can play most requests. They will also play solely off a playlist as long as it is provided well in advance.

You have a large gap between "night to remember" and "below are a number......"

[Dynamic Entertainment]

Thanks Nigel Thats alot more flowing.