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RealSounds
20-03-2009, 09:06 AM
Hi guys, not so long ago got my site sorted, its quite basic at the minute as far as images/gallery etc goes but it will do for now, ive also focused on other entertainment services i can offer aswell :)

www.realsoundsentertainment.co.uk/

ive also uploaded my graphic design site if you have any comments :)
http://realsoundsentertainment.co.uk/about%20us.html

comments and feedback welcome :)

discomobiledj
20-03-2009, 09:12 AM
The SEO is going to suffer on your site....it all pictures!

Looks good though, maybe sort out the menu text as it looks very pixelated.

Corabar Steve
20-03-2009, 10:04 AM
Seems OK to me (from a punter's point of view, once they'd found the site).

One thing though, in your packages you've put "prices from" inside asterisks* which I think should be removed.































*An asterisk usually denotes an additional comment or disclaimer later in the text (like this), which I couldn't find.

It would work if you were saying *Package 1 From only £150* Ideal for up to.....etc
*Package 2 From only £180* (contains larger......etc
& followed it up later (usually at the bottom of the page) With a qualifying statement like *Dependant duration of function ...... etc


Which at the moment it appears that you intended to, but forgot to add the reason the asterisk is there.

Marc J
20-03-2009, 10:33 AM
Not so much a website - more like 5 images linked together. You won't get anywhere with search engines (as discomobiledj already said).

OpenYourDiary
27-03-2009, 12:48 PM
I'd look to change the pixelated navigation and I'd also remove the animation on the page http://www.realsoundsentertainment.co.uk/themedevents.html as it causes problems when you view the page in Safari.

Marc J
31-03-2009, 01:04 PM
I'd look to change the pixelated navigation and I'd also remove the animation on the page http://www.realsoundsentertainment.co.uk/themedevents.html as it causes problems when you view the page in Safari.

The whole page IS the animation (a 1Mb + animated GIF image), and it's flickering as each frame is loaded.