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Rowleys
17-11-2009, 11:33 PM
OK people could people have a look over the website as tell me what you think need editing or adding

as i just feel its missing something

also my spelling is really bad

can anyone proof read and reply any spelling error's so i can fix ?

http://www.rowleysmobileentertainment.co.uk
http://www.rowleysdiscos.co.uk

Same site .

Pe7e
17-11-2009, 11:43 PM
First thing that needs doing, is to get rid of the auto playing wav file, and then dump at least 90% of the animated .gif's, 100% would be better

Rowleys
17-11-2009, 11:46 PM
hmmm ok the wav intro i will get rid of ..

but the gif thats how people remeber the site with the dancing babies lol

but yeh i might tide them up a bit :D

Solitaire Events Ltd
17-11-2009, 11:46 PM
First thing that needs doing, is to get rid of the auto playing wav file, and then dump at least 90% of the animated .gif's, 100% would be better

Agreed.

Rowleys
17-11-2009, 11:55 PM
ok have a little look now see what you think

Marc J
18-11-2009, 08:52 AM
but the gif thats how people remeber the site with the dancing babies lol

but yeh i might tide them up a bit :D

Is your name Homer?

YouTube- homer's web page

Rowleys
18-11-2009, 08:59 AM
ha ha i have cut them down now

WWDJ
18-11-2009, 09:08 AM
Where do I start? Spelling and grammar. Copy paste into Word and check all your spellings and grammar, there are too many to mention here.

Personally i'm not keen on the animated gifs and i don't really see an need for page counters any more as website stats / google analytics do that all for you anyhow.

HTH

Dave

Marc J
18-11-2009, 10:11 AM
I don't get the point of the hidden text at the bottom? White text against an almost white background - it's called cloaking and get get you removed from Google results: -

http://www.google.com/support/webmasters/bin/answer.py?hl=en&answer=35769
http://www.google.com/support/webmasters/bin/answer.py?answer=66353

The text is actually: -


www.mobilediscodirectory.co.uk Rowleys, Mobile, Entertainment, Disco, Karaoke, PA, Live, DJ, Disk, Jockey, music, lights, speakers, Bassline, rnb, chart, 50s, 60s, 70s, 80s, 90s, 00, Birmingham, West midlands, Chemsley Wood, solihull, chelmsley wood, UK, Bargin, C hea p

Quite why you've got www.mobilediscodirectory.co.uk in there first, and not as a link, is puzzling. Surely you're not attempting to capitalise on the MDD's good rankings without actually providing a link to them, and in hidden text? :Naughty:

Gareth
18-11-2009, 12:24 PM
I would agree about the gifs - they look tackey.

Just looking through your T+C's you have spelt 'which' wrong several times with 'witch'. You may wont change these on the PDF versions.

Gareth