no bookings

[deltaforce]

Im getting plenty of hits on my website but there not converting into booking
no calls no one filling in contact forms any help would be great thanks:confused:

[DJWilson]

The auto play music on the contact page wont help!

Most people will close the page if there in work etc with sound on and that starts playing.


Also how many hits, say a week? unique views?

[soundtracker]

Check your spelling, punctuation and grammar, in fact, I would consider a complete re-write. Even your banner on this site has a spelling error. I know we bang on about spelling etcetera on this forum, but it is vitally important, to be honest, if I looked at your site and saw those basic grammatical errors, I wouldn't even consider booking you.
It just doesn't portray a professional image.

[Vectis]

:agree:

The site's OK appearance-wise, but the content is appalling mate, sorry.

And you really should lose this, probably one of the main causes of your high bounce rate:

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[Wayno]

gees thats a lot of spam.

[Charlie Brown]

Honest opinion?

It's not a great site...quite tacky and a bit of a mess.

I say you re-design and re-write the WHOLE site.

Maybe get someone to help you out?

:)

EDIT:

For example;


6. Can my friend use your equipment?
no sorry only me and my staff. But you can have use of the microphone
to make speech's and announcements


Unfortunately clients and their guests aren't able to use or tamper with any of our equipment, however, a microphone is available should you wish to make any speech's or announcements throughout the evening. - would be a better answer?

[Vectis]

Honest opinion?

It's not a great site...quite tacky and a bit of a mess.

I say you re-design and re-write the WHOLE site.

Maybe get someone to help you out?

:)

EDIT:

For example;



Unfortunately clients and their guests aren't able to use or tamper with any of our equipment, however, a microphone is available should you wish to make any speech's or announcements throughout the evening. - would be a better answer?

"speeches" (and one less comma) would be even better ;)

[Charlie Brown]

My bad. Your right - I'm not an English expert...:sofa:

However, it does make ANY site look 100% more professional if they can spell everyday words.

[Megamix]

yep, attention to detail is needed

[ppentertainments]

TBH your website contains very little information. Have a look at it and ask yourself - why would a customer book me after reading my website. All I can see from your website if that you provide music...............and sound, nothing to persuade me to book you.

Also split your phone number into readable sections, no longer than 4 digits long. I still get a majority of people phoning as opposed to e-mailing.

[DiscoPromotions]

I agree with majority of the comments on here about your website.

Throwing in my two pennies

I would recommend starting of very simple
- Get 3rd party point of view at each milestone (MDD forum is a good place)
- First customer focus when presenting information
- Look at your service to see what you do different
- Use high quality images, try to stay away from tacky gifs
- Consistency, same fonts & sizes, colour etc

- Back up you statements
For example "My sound system is over 1kW if needed with a enough lighting to fill any room my prices are also very reasonable......"
- Popular at the moment is video blogs of events.

[CRAZY K]

:agree:

The site's OK appearance-wise, but the content is appalling mate, sorry.

And you really should lose this, probably one of the main causes of your high bounce rate:

<meta name="keywords" content="Delta Disco's, Mobile disco, East Anglia,Wisbech, Norfolk, Cambridgeshire, Suffolk, Wedding, Birthdays, Anniversary, Theme Nights, Disco, Party,
Kings Lynn, March, Peterborough, Spalding, Holbeach, Boston Songs, Function, Entertainment, anniversary party disco, anniversary celebration disco, anniversary dinner party disco,
wedding party in cambridgeshire.


Oh I thought that was just useful information for clients--not spam:)

Generally I would get someone with experience to rewrite the text properly---worth investing in--especially the small i---aaaaargh!

Also I see you let the music do the talking--I believe some on here dont think thats ideal as you could be replaced by a piece of technology measuring--- let me see now---how big is my ipod :eek:

Finally I do sympathise with you covering Lincolnshire--Tonys doing ok but generally the opinion in my business from personal experience is---dont bother---

[paulg]

My site generates about 3 or more enquiries a week which I'm happy with for an outlay of 50 quid. It's been live for about 3 month so if you're not getting that kind of hit rate, there's something wrong. I don't know how that compares with others?

Ours is not up there with the best yet and I am going to improve it but it seems to do the trick in that it shows what we do and what our set up looks like in comparison to the average disco. If all your web visitors see on the site is a typical 'disco' and no USP (Unique Selling Point) they won't be tempted to enquire.

Take a look at some of the other members sites on here. Quite a few are very very nicely produced and managed and you should pick up some tips

www.ardsleyentertainments.co.uk

[deltaforce]

:cry: :cry: :cry:
does anyone know where i can go for help on website setup and all that

[Vectis]

:cry: :cry: :cry:
does anyone know where i can go for help on website setup and all that

Erm, yeah :o Clue's in the sig :zip:

[Solitaire Events Ltd]

Ahem...

10. Signatures: You can set up a signature to appear at the end of every post you make via the User CP tab. Signatures may not contain more than 3 lines of standard-sized text, plus a brief description of the towns/counties/areas you cover as a DJ. Signatures may contain up to 2 links. You may alternatively add a 60 pixel high banner but this will count as 2 of your 3 permitted lines of standard-sized text. You may not add a link in your signature to a site that is similar to this. Only Mobile Discos businesses may be advertised in signatures.
:)

[Larry B Entertainment]

The auto play music on the contact page wont help!

Most people will close the page if there in work etc with sound on and that starts playing.


Also how many hits, say a week? unique views?

I cant stand random music starting when clicking to a site and if there is no stop button I will click off the site altogether.

[Corabar Entertainment]

I don't even look for a 'stop' button... if background music starts playing, I'm gone!

[Charlie Brown]

:cry: :cry: :cry:
does anyone know where i can go for help on website setup and all that

I would happily write it all for you - at a fee. :eek: :)

www.charliebrownsdisco.co.uk

Check out mine...:beer1:

[MagicMusic]

Check out mine...:beer1:

Charlie, you've misspelled companies on your flash intro page ;)

[discomobiledj]

I would happily write it all for you - at a fee. :eek: :)

www.charliebrownsdisco.co.uk

Check out mine...:beer1:

After getting people on here to spell and grammar check it for you!

[yourdj]

ditch the vistaprint one and get a site done by a pro. Its worth investment, assuming your a good DJ that is as it would be a waste of time otherwise.

Before you do that get a good camera (i use a canon powershot) and take some quality photos of your gigs and you so any prospective client knows what they are getting. Bung that on the site.

if you need any help pm me.

[yourdj]

I don't even look for a 'stop' button... if background music starts playing, I'm gone!

especially if it a dodgy porn site and im sitting with other people (not that i browse such things in the company of others that is) :p

[Corabar Entertainment]

if you need any help pm me..... so long as it's not with spelling and grammar, eh Toby?
.....assuming your a good DJ that is as it would be a waste of time otherwise.:eek:

:whistle:

:lol:

[yourdj]

.... so long as it's not with spelling and grammar, eh Toby?:eek:

:whistle:

:lol:

I use dreamweaver and it checks the speling for me :)

[Corabar Entertainment]

Well, a spell-checker wouldn't help you work out the difference between 'your' and 'you're' (your first post) :p .... however, it would have helped here.....
I use dreamweaver and it checks the speling for me :):p :p :p

[yourdj]

Well, a spell-checker wouldn't help you work out the difference between 'your' and 'you're' (your first post) :p .... however, it would have helped here.....:p :p :p

That was an intentional error to illiterate the point. :)
It took me ages to find the right word to misspell.

Are there no other DJ's up at 3am or something?

Im off to bed > :coat: Not into soundtracks and movies.