Website wording

[Cj_The_Dj]

Hi guys & girls, I feel the website is letting me down big style but i can not afford a professionally made one just yet..

even if i could i would still be struggling with the wording..

basically I'm here on the scrounge for 10 mins of your time to help me re word parts of the side and improve it..

thanks in advance for the help,, i DO appreciate it :beer1:

Http://www.CJ-entertainments.com

[rob1963]

Hiya CJ,

I've had a quick look at your website, and you're right...the grammar, punctuation & wording is very poor.

I'm off to bed in a bit, but when I've got more time, I'll come up with some suggestions for improvememts to some of the wording.

:)

[James]

Hi mate

The best thing to do is to have a look at other disco sites, and copy and paste text into notepad, then change the text to fit in with how you want it to sound

Don't just copy & paste the text straight on to your site though, that's a no-no