Updated website.

[Tom Lovick]

Hi all,

Just updated my website.

Please give me feedback from a client point of view!

Thanks,

Tom

[discomobiledj]

And your website address is......

[Booche]

Think its this one Steve

http://www.horizon-events.co.uk/

Cheers Dave :)

[discomobiledj]

Don't like the banner which looks like clipart, the name in the header is hardly visable.

You don't need a holding page before the main site.

HOME:

No information on there at all, this is the first real page of your site. You need to grab their attention straight away.

SERVICES:

Different fonts on the page. I'd also remove the why use us column on the right.

GALLERY:

Watermark them! Your disclaimer at the bottom of the page is not going to make a blind bit of difference.

LINKS:

To be fair, why would list the forums you visit and essentially offer other DJ's services. Also the menu is horizontal on this page but vertical on the others, one or the other, not both.

I assume you do alot of high end discos. Would it not be better to get a professional website made rather than a DIY with Google Sites? The template is very poor and looks like it's been put together in 30 seconds.

I don't mean to offend you and I'm sorry if I have but from a clients point of view, I wouldn't book you from site alone.

[Gareth]

Is all that equipment yours Tom?

[rob1963]

Whoaaa Tom!

All that equipment, all those services & your own Limited company, and you're still only 16!

You certainly started young.

Respect!

[Booche]

Hope thats not a can of Carling you/someone is drinking in one of the images in your gallery :eek:

Cheers Dave :)

[Corabar Steve]

I'm going to be brutally honest, so please don't take this the wrong way.

The whole thing is let down by the gallery. while there are some nice pictures, the rig pics really do you no favours. That has to be the messiest rig I have ever set eyes on.

It needs some sort of frontage, even screens would look better. Having lights on the floor where punters can get to them is always a bad idea (unless it's uplighting). The rest of it looks like it's been lung together haphazardly & don't even get me started on the cables.

A few other notes on he rig pic. Surely that bar can't be rated to carry the weight of that amount of lights & try as I might I can't see any signs of safety chains /cables. None of the leads appear to be taped down either. & why does there appear to be a guitar amp in front in one picture?

[Tom Lovick]

Is all that equipment yours Tom?

Yep :)

[Tom Lovick]

Whoaaa Tom!

All that equipment, all those services & your own Limited company, and you're still only 16!

You certainly started young.

Respect!

Thanks! :D :D

[Corabar Steve]

Tom, see the button with "+ on it at the bottom of each post?

That's multiquote. Please use it to reply when you want to answer more than one post at a time:thanks:

[Tom Lovick]

Tom, see the button with "+ on it at the bottom of each post?

That's multiquote. Please use it to reply when you want to answer more than one post at a time:thanks:

Sorry

[Corabar Steve]

No worries, just saves us having to go around behind you merging all your posts :sj:

[Tom Lovick]

I'm going to be brutally honest, so please don't take this the wrong way.

The whole thing is let down by the gallery. while there are some nice pictures, the rig pics really do you no favours. That has to be the messiest rig I have ever set eyes on.

It needs some sort of frontage, even screens would look better. Having lights on the floor where punters can get to them is always a bad idea (unless it's uplighting). The rest of it looks like it's been lung together haphazardly & don't even get me started on the cables.

A few other notes on he rig pic. Surely that bar can't be rated to carry the weight of that amount of lights & try as I might I can't see any signs of safety chains /cables. None of the leads appear to be taped down either. & why does there appear to be a guitar amp in front in one picture?

Some of the pictures are from 2 years ago when we first started DJing. We were using what ever equipment we had, and the guitar amp was being used as a Bass bin, Treble turned right down, bass up. :bang:

[Jiggles]

Gonna be blunt here but I don't like it. Looks really haphazard and thrown together in 5 minutes. Sorry.