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yourdj
07-01-2011, 06:39 PM
And check for grammar.
My normal spell checker people have been busy and I chucked these up in a hurry.
i am dyslexic and although thats no excuse I have missed some spelling errors so need them sorted asap as bookings are coming in now.

http://www.yourdj.co.uk/
http://www.newforestwedding.co.uk/

You are only allowed ONE post and bullet point all errors in order on a separate line.

ie:
1: yourdj - your dj does not make sense :p
2: New forest wedding - its master of ceremonies, not master of ceremony.

Who ever gets the most wins a £10 gift voucher for play.com

any other general comments list at the bottom of the post.
Regards the New forest wedding sit I am changing the master or ceremonies bit for now until i have some decent footage and pics.

The winner will be announce at the end of next week (friday)


http://www.electricpig.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/play-com-credit-card.jpg

Solitaire Events Ltd
07-01-2011, 06:43 PM
2: New forest wedding - its master of ceremonies, not master of ceremony.



It is = it's

Sheesh...:D

yourdj
07-01-2011, 06:49 PM
It is = it's

Sheesh...:D

i can see many more posts like this coming.
oh well only the best one conserning my websites will win the prise. ;)

Solitaire Events Ltd
07-01-2011, 06:51 PM
i can see many more posts like this coming.
oh well only the best one conserning my websites will win the prise. ;)

Concerning.

Prize.

Spell checker. :D

funkymook
07-01-2011, 06:52 PM
And check for grammar.
My normal spell checker people have been busy and I chucked these up in a hurry.
i am dyslexic and although thats no excuse I have missed some spelling errors so need them sorted asap as bookings are coming in now.

http://www.yourdj.co.uk/
http://www.newforestwedding.co.uk/

You are only allowed ONE post and bullet point all errors in order on a separate line.

ie:
1: yourdj - your dj does not make sense :p
2: New forest wedding - its master of ceremonies, not master of ceremony.

Who ever gets the most wins a £10 gift voucher for play.com

any other general comments list at the bottom of the post.
Regards the New forest wedding sit I am changing the master or ceremonies bit for now until i have some decent footage and pics.

The winner will be announce at the end of next week (friday)


http://www.electricpig.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/play-com-credit-card.jpg

Toby, really don't mind checking things over for anyone as a favour (as I'm sure many would do the same for me if I asked) - but I'm really not going to enter a competition and abide by rules, do it in a particular format etc.


Happy to have a look when I get a few spare minutes and feedback in dribs and drabs - any more than that and I think you should just pay someone to do the work :)

flatliners
07-01-2011, 06:52 PM
i can see many more posts like this coming.
oh well only the best one conserning my websites will win the prise. ;)

Its prize

Solitaire Events Ltd
07-01-2011, 07:00 PM
Its prize

The blind leading the blind....

I said that a few posts back and Its = It's (It is)

yourdj
07-01-2011, 07:35 PM
Toby, really don't mind checking things over for anyone as a favour (as I'm sure many would do the same for me if I asked) - but I'm really not going to enter a competition and abide by rules, do it in a particular format etc.


Happy to have a look when I get a few spare minutes and feedback in dribs and drabs - any more than that and I think you should just pay someone to do the work :)

No probs I was hoping to make it fun for people. dribs and drabs is fine.

Who ever offers the most useful and numerous critisisms wins the prize.
Hows that ;)


Its prize

I know I was attempting to be funny :)

funkymook
07-01-2011, 07:48 PM
Here's your starter for 10.

Did notice on the 10 Questions page, at the bottom it say says 'Our prices start from £345' yet on your Private Functions page it's 'Our prices start from £285' and on the Wedding page it's Our prices start from £385'.

So I'm not sure what starts at £345??

And 'and' - you use '&' throughout both sites where 'and' should be used.

Sometimes you have 'DJ', others times 'Dj'

Corries back on....gotta go.......

Johnny P
07-01-2011, 10:56 PM
SAILSBURY

nationaility

ceremony.

We only use a handful top quality full time


Night club

We only use a handful top quality full

YoYour

Dorset!vents.asons

YoYour

We only use a handful top quality full time performers


A Proffesional, Reliable & Modern Entertainment Solution

Eg - 25th March 2011


YoYour

Dorset!vents.asons

yourdj
07-01-2011, 11:21 PM
SAILSBURY

nationaility

ceremony.

We only use a handful top quality full time


Night club

We only use a handful top quality full

YoYour

Dorset!vents.asons

YoYour

We only use a handful top quality full time performers


A Proffesional, Reliable & Modern Entertainment Solution

Eg - 25th March 2011


YoYour

Dorset!vents.asons

Thanks very much :D

Where are the mistakes as there are quite a few pages on the site.
Also for everyone else suggestions for how it should be written as I am a bit thick :D

Thanks :)

Booche
08-01-2011, 10:48 AM
Not a spelling error BUT on the Newforest website 2 of the bottom links dont work,

The WEDDING FAYRES & STAG EVENTS dont work on IE, FF or Google Chrome.

yourdj
10-01-2011, 04:27 PM
Here's your starter for 10.

Did notice on the 10 Questions page, at the bottom it say says 'Our prices start from £345' yet on your Private Functions page it's 'Our prices start from £285' and on the Wedding page it's Our prices start from £385'.

So I'm not sure what starts at £345??

And 'and' - you use '&' throughout both sites where 'and' should be used.

Sometimes you have 'DJ', others times 'Dj'

Corries back on....gotta go.......


SAILSBURY

nationaility

ceremony.

We only use a handful top quality full time


Night club

We only use a handful top quality full

YoYour

Dorset!vents.asons

YoYour

We only use a handful top quality full time performers


A Proffesional, Reliable & Modern Entertainment Solution

Eg - 25th March 2011


YoYour

Dorset!vents.asons


Not a spelling error BUT on the Newforest website 2 of the bottom links dont work,

The WEDDING FAYRES & STAG EVENTS dont work on IE, FF or Google Chrome.


thanks people any more this finishes on Friday. £10 music voucher up for grabs! :)