View Full Version : Competition - Spell check my website(s)!
yourdj
07-01-2011, 06:39 PM
And check for grammar.
My normal spell checker people have been busy and I chucked these up in a hurry.
i am dyslexic and although thats no excuse I have missed some spelling errors so need them sorted asap as bookings are coming in now.
http://www.yourdj.co.uk/
http://www.newforestwedding.co.uk/
You are only allowed ONE post and bullet point all errors in order on a separate line.
ie:
1: yourdj - your dj does not make sense :p
2: New forest wedding - its master of ceremonies, not master of ceremony.
Who ever gets the most wins a £10 gift voucher for play.com
any other general comments list at the bottom of the post.
Regards the New forest wedding sit I am changing the master or ceremonies bit for now until i have some decent footage and pics.
The winner will be announce at the end of next week (friday)
http://www.electricpig.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/play-com-credit-card.jpg
Solitaire Events Ltd
07-01-2011, 06:43 PM
2: New forest wedding - its master of ceremonies, not master of ceremony.
It is = it's
Sheesh...:D
yourdj
07-01-2011, 06:49 PM
It is = it's
Sheesh...:D
i can see many more posts like this coming.
oh well only the best one conserning my websites will win the prise. ;)
Solitaire Events Ltd
07-01-2011, 06:51 PM
i can see many more posts like this coming.
oh well only the best one conserning my websites will win the prise. ;)
Concerning.
Prize.
Spell checker. :D
funkymook
07-01-2011, 06:52 PM
And check for grammar.
My normal spell checker people have been busy and I chucked these up in a hurry.
i am dyslexic and although thats no excuse I have missed some spelling errors so need them sorted asap as bookings are coming in now.
http://www.yourdj.co.uk/
http://www.newforestwedding.co.uk/
You are only allowed ONE post and bullet point all errors in order on a separate line.
ie:
1: yourdj - your dj does not make sense :p
2: New forest wedding - its master of ceremonies, not master of ceremony.
Who ever gets the most wins a £10 gift voucher for play.com
any other general comments list at the bottom of the post.
Regards the New forest wedding sit I am changing the master or ceremonies bit for now until i have some decent footage and pics.
The winner will be announce at the end of next week (friday)
http://www.electricpig.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/play-com-credit-card.jpg
Toby, really don't mind checking things over for anyone as a favour (as I'm sure many would do the same for me if I asked) - but I'm really not going to enter a competition and abide by rules, do it in a particular format etc.
Happy to have a look when I get a few spare minutes and feedback in dribs and drabs - any more than that and I think you should just pay someone to do the work :)
flatliners
07-01-2011, 06:52 PM
i can see many more posts like this coming.
oh well only the best one conserning my websites will win the prise. ;)
Its prize
Solitaire Events Ltd
07-01-2011, 07:00 PM
Its prize
The blind leading the blind....
I said that a few posts back and Its = It's (It is)
yourdj
07-01-2011, 07:35 PM
Toby, really don't mind checking things over for anyone as a favour (as I'm sure many would do the same for me if I asked) - but I'm really not going to enter a competition and abide by rules, do it in a particular format etc.
Happy to have a look when I get a few spare minutes and feedback in dribs and drabs - any more than that and I think you should just pay someone to do the work :)
No probs I was hoping to make it fun for people. dribs and drabs is fine.
Who ever offers the most useful and numerous critisisms wins the prize.
Hows that ;)
Its prize
I know I was attempting to be funny :)
funkymook
07-01-2011, 07:48 PM
Here's your starter for 10.
Did notice on the 10 Questions page, at the bottom it say says 'Our prices start from £345' yet on your Private Functions page it's 'Our prices start from £285' and on the Wedding page it's Our prices start from £385'.
So I'm not sure what starts at £345??
And 'and' - you use '&' throughout both sites where 'and' should be used.
Sometimes you have 'DJ', others times 'Dj'
Corries back on....gotta go.......
Johnny P
07-01-2011, 10:56 PM
SAILSBURY
nationaility
ceremony.
We only use a handful top quality full time
Night club
We only use a handful top quality full
YoYour
Dorset!vents.asons
YoYour
We only use a handful top quality full time performers
A Proffesional, Reliable & Modern Entertainment Solution
Eg - 25th March 2011
YoYour
Dorset!vents.asons
yourdj
07-01-2011, 11:21 PM
SAILSBURY
nationaility
ceremony.
We only use a handful top quality full time
Night club
We only use a handful top quality full
YoYour
Dorset!vents.asons
YoYour
We only use a handful top quality full time performers
A Proffesional, Reliable & Modern Entertainment Solution
Eg - 25th March 2011
YoYour
Dorset!vents.asons
Thanks very much :D
Where are the mistakes as there are quite a few pages on the site.
Also for everyone else suggestions for how it should be written as I am a bit thick :D
Thanks :)
Booche
08-01-2011, 10:48 AM
Not a spelling error BUT on the Newforest website 2 of the bottom links dont work,
The WEDDING FAYRES & STAG EVENTS dont work on IE, FF or Google Chrome.
yourdj
10-01-2011, 04:27 PM
Here's your starter for 10.
Did notice on the 10 Questions page, at the bottom it say says 'Our prices start from £345' yet on your Private Functions page it's 'Our prices start from £285' and on the Wedding page it's Our prices start from £385'.
So I'm not sure what starts at £345??
And 'and' - you use '&' throughout both sites where 'and' should be used.
Sometimes you have 'DJ', others times 'Dj'
Corries back on....gotta go.......
SAILSBURY
nationaility
ceremony.
We only use a handful top quality full time
Night club
We only use a handful top quality full
YoYour
Dorset!vents.asons
YoYour
We only use a handful top quality full time performers
A Proffesional, Reliable & Modern Entertainment Solution
Eg - 25th March 2011
YoYour
Dorset!vents.asons
Not a spelling error BUT on the Newforest website 2 of the bottom links dont work,
The WEDDING FAYRES & STAG EVENTS dont work on IE, FF or Google Chrome.
thanks people any more this finishes on Friday. £10 music voucher up for grabs! :)
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