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Mark Wild
07-09-2011, 06:11 PM
One of my sites was a bit stale so I've put some work into re-doing it.

Any school boy errors you can spot, (spelling, grammar or otherwise) personal opinions you have on anything and maybe tech issues you see with other browsers would be really appreciated, if you get 2 minutes to have a look that is. :D

http://www.weddingdjglasgow.co.uk/

discomobiledj
07-09-2011, 06:40 PM
On the Who I Am page I would move the photo over to the right hand side as I started reading the bit on the right rather than the text underneath.

On the charge page , It's just a personal preference but I hate Comic Sans! Reminds me of junior school. Also the text at the top looks too condensed.

The only other thing is that your email address is on the site. Not sure how much spam you get but it's worth scrambling your email address here -> http://www.golivecentral.com/pages/scramble.shtml

Mark Wild
07-09-2011, 06:53 PM
Shifted the pic over to the right, cheers Steve.

Solitaire Events Ltd
07-09-2011, 07:23 PM
One of the pictures looks a bit blurry...:sj:

Cowlinn
07-09-2011, 07:25 PM
Lovely site, really really like that.

If it was me on the who I am page I wouldn't have "Hi there" in italics(just bold)

Have the logo in the top left hand corner take you to the home page

On some of the pages the "contact me" hyper link is a bit off

Also the send form/submit form are miles out on Chrome

Other than that I think it's a really nice site. :)

Mark Wild
07-09-2011, 07:53 PM
One of the pictures looks a bit blurry...:sj:

'tis I, LeClerc....' :D


Lovely site, really really like that.

If it was me on the who I am page I wouldn't have "Hi there" in italics(just bold)

Have the logo in the top left hand corner take you to the home page

On some of the pages the "contact me" hyper link is a bit off

Also the send form/submit form are miles out on Chrome

Other than that I think it's a really nice site. :)

Changed that stuff apart from the 'contact' hyperlink' that's being a cow :(

MikeW
07-09-2011, 08:26 PM
Hi Mark, just noticed, on the What I do page, last line. I will be take requests on the night:)

Cowlinn
07-09-2011, 08:30 PM
Changed that stuff apart from the 'contact' hyperlink' that's being a cow :(

:thumbsup:

Shaun
07-09-2011, 09:44 PM
Looks good to me :thumbsup:

Mark Wild
08-09-2011, 01:24 AM
Hi Mark, just noticed, on the What I do page, last line. I will be take requests on the night:)

Thanks Mike :beer1:


Looks good to me :thumbsup:

Well that's a definite positive, cheers Shaun. :D

yourdj
08-09-2011, 01:42 AM
Looks good. Bit colour and emotionless but I do like the design.
Not your standard wedding site, but it may suit up your neck of the woods.

Although ts a bit too much about you IMO and not enough about the client.
As a prospective wedding client I would worry that you would not listen to what I wanted and do what you think is right.

There is allot of text text and some is a bit of a mouthful and does not flow very well. Like this:

I can provide you with a modern and fresh approach to wedding entertainment, a service which you can mould to suit your exact needs, along with right the music on the night to suit the most diverse crowd any DJ will ever have to deal with, catering for the youngest and also the more senior members of your friends and family.

Sorry to be negative. :(

Mark Wild
08-09-2011, 10:15 AM
Looks good. Bit colour and emotionless but I do like the design.
Not your standard wedding site, but it may suit up your neck of the woods.

Although ts a bit too much about you IMO and not enough about the client.
As a prospective wedding client I would worry that you would not listen to what I wanted and do what you think is right.

There is allot of text text and some is a bit of a mouthful and does not flow very well. Like this:

I can provide you with a modern and fresh approach to wedding entertainment, a service which you can mould to suit your exact needs, along with right the music on the night to suit the most diverse crowd any DJ will ever have to deal with, catering for the youngest and also the more senior members of your friends and family.

Sorry to be negative. :(

It's cool I wanted opinions so I can tweak it, that is a bit of a mouthful you're right, I'll look at rewording it.


Although ts a bit too much about you

I'm sorry Toby but I won't be adding any videos of you to it :D

DiscoMagic
08-09-2011, 10:26 AM
I Like it - alot - TBH :D

The only thing I am not sure about is the Script Font used with your name and headline on your home page - but that might be your brand image???

Oh and the other thing is type face on the prices page meant to be in BOLD??? Bit garish and would be better if it were like the rest of the site!

PS... was that the 'real' david tennant giving you feedback?!

Cowlinn
08-09-2011, 10:27 AM
Just another thought I've had.

Could you make whatever page you're on, the link appear bold*?

IE. If I'm on the "Who I am' page then "Who I am" is bold in the navigation bar?



*Doesn't necessarily need to be bold, just a way of identifying. Could be different colour, italics etc.

AndyC
08-09-2011, 10:29 AM
I like the site but I think the colour pictures on the home page would be better in black & white to keep the feel of the site the same.

Andy

Mark Wild
08-09-2011, 10:30 AM
I Like it - alot - TBH :D

The only thing I am not sure about is the Script Font used with your name and headline on your home page - but that might be your brand image???

Oh and the other thing is type face on the prices page meant to be in BOLD??? Bit garish and would be better if it were like the rest of the site!

PS... was that the 'real' david tennant giving you feedback?!

The script font I quite like :p The BOLD part I must have done without thinking and you're right it does look garish. I'll change that, thanks :)

Not Dr.Who no :D


I like the site but I think the colour pictures on the home page would be better in black & white to keep the feel of the site the same.

Andy

I need a wee bit of colour Andy I think on there.

hammy
08-09-2011, 03:29 PM
Loving it Mark, I like the way its not full blown colours everywhere. Time mine got updated.