Website

[Jiggles]

www.cb-entertainments.co.uk (http://www.cb-entertainments.co.uk)

Good bad and ugly comments please :D

[Paul James Promotions]

Homepage looks impressive, not so sure about the picture of the feet or the intro though.

Also, you need to check your spelling of 'experience'

Regards,

Jamie

[Solitaire Events Ltd]

The flash intro is nice, but you won't get found on the search engines using that as a home page.

Colours are nice - I like the purple, and I've said it before, but can't you get rid of those feet?!!!

The about us page could do with a bit more background info about what you do.

Quite well set out and easy to read though.

[Thames Valley Discos]

Our prices just start at £20!* ????

[Ricesnaps]

1. Bin the flash intro - personally I wouldn't have gone any further (bored!)
2. Layout looks very smart and well laid out
3. Needs more content - it really really doesn't say very much about you or what you do
4. Get shot of those highly anoying 2007 things that dribble down the screen, very offputting
5. seems to take a long time to load up on my PC here (work laptop in use, not my poorly home PC)

[Tonsk]

Agree with the intro comments - Get rid of it, it doesn't help me in a search for a disco, just confirms which site I have logged onto.

Also, the 2007 bubbles... Whats all that about? What if I was interested in booking a 2008 function? Do I need a different site?

Links: at the bottom of the pages where it says Want to see pictures of us? Check out our gallery, make THIS comment a link too... If you have whetted my appetite to see pictures, I dont then want to hunt to find them, same as quotations etc..

The rest of it looks ok, easy to use but too would also say add more relevant content and, do prices really start from only £20? And if so, do you ever make money?

[Solitaire Events Ltd]

As he isn't here....

I do believe that CB was set up with a grant and is not allowed to make a profit, hence the cheaper prices.

So, let's all look at the facts before we go down that route!

[Sam]

And he is young!

I think the website is great for someone of a younger age! and i presume the flash and the 2007 bits (did you get the script from dynamic drive batherway?) are great - although maybe not the best of things to intice customers.

I think this is a template from the net and so im guessing that is why it isn't the quickest at loading.

Still.. it is essentially a not profit business.. so the website is not too essential.. so i reckon it's fine to have cool flash intros. :-D

[Jiggles]

Right iv taken on the comments


Sam this is NOT a template some made it for me!!!!!

[Sam]

Okey:)

Few spelling mistakes =
Traviling = Traveling
Enterprizing = enterprising
experence = Experience
specilise = Specialize (not too sure about this.. it is what ms word said though)
Partys = parties

I love the 'snow' effect from DD - but maybe loose the white pixelated bit around the outsides? I can do it for you if you so wish - send it to [email protected]

:)

[Jiggles]

Right done the spelling

[Corabar Entertainment]

Okey:)Traviling = TravelingWRONG! Travelling!!! :eek:

[Sam]

Dam it! Blooming ms word haha

Just checked it.. it is on UK spelling and if i put two Ls it is changing it back to one.. are you sure?

Sorry callum if it is wrong.

[Jiggles]

i seen that erron as soon as i put it up!

[Sam]

Sorry callum if it is wrong.

post above.

[Corabar Entertainment]

post above^What...
i seen that erron as soon as i put it up!:confused:

[Sam]

pointing out i had said sorry lol

[Solitaire Events Ltd]

Okey:)

Few spelling mistakes =
Traviling = Traveling
Enterprizing = enterprising
experence = Experience
specilise = Specialize (not too sure about this.. it is what ms word said though)
Partys = parties

but maybe loose the white pixelated bit
:)

Are you sure you should be the one commenting on spelling?:p

[Corabar Entertainment]

:doh: Missed that!

[kilmeedyman]

Spelling..
The flash intro says:-

"Berwickshires #1 Childerns Entertainment Comapany"

Both 'Childrens' and 'Company' are spelt wrong.

Sorry, but you need to give this guy a sharp poke if he is designing web sites professionally. As many spelling mistakes as that are just not good enough. Especially when its your introduction to clients. What do you think their first impression will be?

Don't see too much wrong with the feet myself.

I also suggest that at the bottom of the home page where it says "Who are we? Check out the About Us page" you turn the "check out the about us page" bit into a link to the about us page.

The same goes for the other three answers at the bottom.
Make navigation easy.

Also I believe the email address is mis-spelt on the contact us page.

General look is ok though.
As has been said, perhaps a little more info would be nice.
Gallery is well presented with a neat bit of javascript.

[pulsemobiledisco]

Same as what others have said about the spelling. If you are a childrens disco then you really need to change the pictures on the homepage. They make it look like you are a club DJ which you are not (not yet anyway!). Can't understand what foot is all about either!

[Corabar Steve]

Spelling..
The flash intro says:-

"Berwickshires #1 Childerns Entertainment Comapany"

Both 'Childrens' and 'Company' are spelt wrong.

Childerns is Scotts coloquial English for childrens isn't it? :D

Comapany????????????

A company that sends you to sleep????????? :D :D

[Jiggles]

Ah **** :(

[Shaun]

One of the images on the top right has a spelling mistake. Offically should be 'Officially'.

[BeerFunk]

You are stubborn about the foot, aren't you? :)

Spelling is such an important factor for the professional look - and such an easy thing to get right, with spell checkers regularly available on every PC, the internet and even most mobile phones! ;)

[Jiggles]

well the foot i cannot change sadly :( as ill need to speak to the person who made it :p

[BeerFunk]

well the foot i cannot change sadly :( as ill need to speak to the person who made it :p
You don't have access to the files on the server? That image is made up of jpeg files image_04.jpg, image_07.jpg & image_10.jpg

All you would have to do is alter them, and put a different image in :)

[Jiggles]

thats d@mn difficult!! :S

[BeerFunk]

Try these, Callum.. just back up the 3 files on the server, and replace them with these. If they don't look right, you can upload the backups again :)

Obviously they don't look right here, because they're not aligned right :D

http://www.belter.eclipse.co.uk/index_04.jpg
http://www.belter.eclipse.co.uk/index_07.jpg
http://www.belter.eclipse.co.uk/index_10.jpg

[Jiggles]

Thanks Callum I owe You one ;) But sadly it dosent fit :(

[BeerFunk]

Aah, strange, they should be the same size... maybe someone else can help out, Shaun's (Elite DJ) good with Photoshop? :)

[Jiggles]

:D :D lol SHAUN!!! Where are you :D :D :D

[Shaun]

Try this.

[BeerFunk]

I think he wants to lose the feet as well, correct me if I'm wrong Callum? :)

[Jiggles]

Yeh the guy who made it for me just told me to go away and said he had bettert things to do :mad: :mad: :mad:

[A1DL]

Callum - apart from the graphics which bear little relevance to the services you're selling, I don't like the very small scrolling area to the bottom left of the page. I would make that larger and more prominent, reduce the size of the "welcome" and menu area above it, currently the content area is probably less than 20% of the viewable area

HTH

Tony

[Jiggles]

Its difficult to "move" things really :(

[Shaun]

I think he wants to lose the feet as well, correct me if I'm wrong Callum? :)

Now that the websites been spliced it makes it more difficult to replace the images that are cut into segments. Not impossible...but difficult.


Callum, leave it with me and I'll see what I can do for you when I have a little spare time.

[DMX Will]

Yeh the guy who made it for me just told me to go away and said he had bettert things to do :mad: :mad: :mad:

He sounds nice, if you need any website help, give me a buzz on ye ole PM system laddie :)

[BeerFunk]

Now that the websites been spliced it makes it more difficult to replace the images that are cut into segments. Not impossible...but difficult.
Well, I thought I had it in post 29, but Callum says they don't fit when uploaded to the server. If I had access to his server space, I could fiddle about with it and make it fit, although I think another solution is to match them up to the original segments in size - ie. x pixels by y pixels

[Jiggles]

Thanks all :D


Will i may need a help with somthing ;) ii catch you later once iv finished school :D

[DMX Will]

Thanks all :D


Will i may need a help with somthing ;) ii catch you later once iv finished school :D

I hope I can contain myself ;) Catch ya in a bit :)

P.S You'll have to PM me as my MSN machine is packed up, I'm mooooving on friday :)

[Jiggles]

Right i have COMPLEATLY redesigned it my self what do you think :) (www.cb-entertainments.co.uk)

[Corabar Steve]

Rubbish!! :d:d


Not too bad Callum & you've (nearly) got rid of the feet :)

[Dragonfly]

good work callum ...... what no flames??????:D :D :D

not a fan of black backgrounds but thats just a personal opinion looking good.

[Jiggles]

Rubbish!! :d:d


Not too bad Callum & you've (nearly) got rid of the feet :)


The gallery :D:D:D

[Shaun]

On the 'about us' page you've spelt travelling wrong.

Overall, I like the new site better. Good work.

[Jiggles]

On the 'about us' page you've spelt travelling wrong.

Overall, I like the new site better. Good work.


Sorted :D

[Corabar Steve]

The gallery :D:D:D
Ahem!

Not too bad Callum & you've (nearly) got rid of the feet :)
Twit! :D :D :D

[Jiggles]

OI :D

i was jsut saying what page :p

[Corabar Steve]

I agree with Dave, I'm no fan of black backgrounds either.

A lot of people have trouble with them & personally unless I know that I really want something from the site concerned, I won't bother with "black sites"

[Jiggles]

the only reason its black is the lights in the corners have black backgrounds on them