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Spirits High
17-01-2007, 11:57 PM
Hi all,

Have been playing around with my site and given it a bit of a tweak

Comments and constructive critism would be appreciated

http://www.spiritshigh.org.uk

Now been spell and grammar checked!

so have a look now!
BeerFunk
18-01-2007, 12:34 AM
If you're looking for ideas for improvement...

I'm not a fan of the 'flame' graphics on the home page, I think they look tacky and a bit 90's. More importantly - there are spelling and grammatical mistakes throughout. I'm not going to read through it and get every one for you, but there are 2 in here :

"We'll take away all the worry form wondering what the DJ will be like, so then the Bride & Groom can go of on honeymoon with great memories of the first day of their new life."

Not bad though :)
soundtracker
18-01-2007, 07:05 AM
Agreed, run it through a spell and grammar check- it lets you down at the mo!
Spirits High
18-01-2007, 09:51 AM
Points taken, now all sorted.

I hope!
Shaun
18-01-2007, 10:23 AM
I agree with the point about removing the animated flame images. You have a nice funky looking site which is spoiled by the tacky animated gifs. Overall, very nice site.
Spirits High
18-01-2007, 10:46 AM
The flames are there as I wanted something to break the page up a bit.

Any suggestions on how to liven the home page up, just think it looks a bit bland on it's own.
Danno13
18-01-2007, 11:02 AM
You need some pictures from your gigs really. A couple of rig shots, but mainly pictures of people dancing and enjoying themselves.
Spirits High
18-01-2007, 11:26 AM
danno, is your site done by you or someone build it for you?

Will wait to get more "opinions" until then the flames stay!
Danno13
18-01-2007, 11:34 AM
I built mine myself :)
soundtracker
18-01-2007, 12:18 PM
Write out one hundred times:

G - u -a - r - a- n - t - e - e -d

On my desk first thing tomorrow morning!!
Shaun
18-01-2007, 01:02 PM
I built mine myself :)

Your site looks great. Easy to navigate, simplistic, clean and professional looking. Great job Dan :)
Danno13
18-01-2007, 01:47 PM
Thanks Shaun. I like yours too. Do you use DJi for the client area?? Keep meaning to build something similar for my site.
Shaun
18-01-2007, 02:00 PM
Do you use DJi for the client area?? Keep meaning to build something similar for my site.


I don't use DJi.. My client area was custom built from the ground up to my specifications, My web guy did a great job.
Danno13
18-01-2007, 02:08 PM
Ahh.. yeah, thats what i plan to do.. it just keeps getting pushed further and further down the "to-do" list. :D