Website Feedback

[charlie]

www.bringthenightclub2u.com I would be very greatful for any feedback you can give me on my site, iv just changed the colour sheme to make to it look more porfessional.

please let me know your thoughts!

Cheers

Charlie

[funkymike]

I like it!!

But the picture on the main page is pants, you got some better pics in your galley


mike

[Jiggles]

i noticed in the contact page that your email address goes to the the menu bar!

[rob1963]

www.bringthenightclub2u.com I would be very greatful for any feedback you can give me on my site, iv just changed the colour sheme to make to it look more porfessional.

please let me know your thoughts!

Cheers

Charlie

Hiya Charlie,

Not bad overall, but the following things stood out to me:

I don't see the relevance of the coloured blobs (mostly blue) on your background. I would either remove them or replace them with something more appropriate, such as CDs or disco lights.

The disco name is Neon Lights Disco, but the url is bringthenightclub2u.com, which may be a little confusing. I think it's best for the website address to be the same as the disco name.

The mobile phone number looks a bit confusing & hard to read when quoted with no breaks. In other words I think 07974 542 423 or 07974 542423 would look better than 07974542423, and would have less chance of people getting it wrong when they call you.

The "DJs" page talks about your DJ, who it says is Charlie T. Therefore, why is "DJs" plural?

The gallery page currently has almost 50 full size pics, and involves LOADS of scrolling to view them all. I think half this number would be more than enough. It might also be be better to have thumbnails which enlarge when you click on them rather than the full size pics you have at the moment.

On the quotes page the "m" at the end of your your email address goes into the menu area.

There are some spelling & punctuation errors too:

At the top of each page, "neon lights disco" should be "Neon Lights Disco"

On the welcome page "Proffesional Disco Services" needs changing to "Professional Disco Services" Also, the spelling of "safety" and "peace" is incorrect.

On the Your night page "Your in control" should be "You're in control" and on the same page the spelling of "receive" is incorrect.

On the quotes page, you say that you can provide a quote if they give you the date, location, duration, start time & finish time. Why ask for the duration? It's asking them to state the obvious. If you have the start time & finish time you know the duration!

Also on the quotes page, the spelling of the words "special" & "requirements" is incorrect. On the same page, you need to replace the capital letters with small letters at the beginning of the words "location", "duration", "start", "finish" etc.

I wouldn't worry too much though - many of us DJs aren't exactly experts at spelling & punctuation...you only have to read through this forum to see that!

Hope these ideas & suggestions help.

Regards,

Rob

:)

[Penfold42]

Not bad...

Some of the same comments as Rob1963 so won't repeat them.
One other for me is try to get the page to fit rather than scrolling down.



I wouldn't worry too much though - many of us DJs aren't exactly experts at spelling & punctuation...you only have to read through this forum to see that!


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