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soundmaster mobile disco
02-05-2007, 09:21 PM
hi i would like to show you all my new website.
www.soundmastermobiledisco.co.uk
flatliners
02-05-2007, 09:31 PM
not to bad but where did you get the bit about njd datamoons being voted the best lighting effect in the world
soundmaster mobile disco
02-05-2007, 09:41 PM
its on the njd website
Danno13
02-05-2007, 09:56 PM
Couple of points based on my first impressions.
1) The background pic behind the text makes it hard to read.
2) Your contact details need to be in big text on the top banner, they don't stand out enough at the moment just being on that business card image.
Other than that, its nice and easy to find your way around and lots on information there.. well done!
flatliners
03-05-2007, 12:41 AM
and i wouldnt say the data moons are the best lighting effect wat i want to know is who voted the data moons maybe best budget lighting effect but have been around for ages not getting at sound master but njd
Corabar Steve
03-05-2007, 07:39 AM
Get rid of the background pic, it's way too heavy for the text.
Solitaire Events Ltd
03-05-2007, 09:53 AM
its on the njd website
It was back in 1995 I believe?
DJ Frankie
03-05-2007, 11:24 AM
I agree, the backgound doesnt work it makes it far too busy.
Marc J
03-05-2007, 12:24 PM
Generally looks OK, doesn't need a lot of work but a few minor changes could make all the difference: -
1) The spark.gif animation at the top is a little distracting.
2) The soundmastercard.jpg image should be in exactly the same position whenever it's shown, it tends to jump about a bit.
3) As others have said, the background is too busy and makes the contrast with the text bad in parts.
4) PLI and PAT validators should be made to fit a black background (they have white edges).
5) Your logo at the top should be a link to your homepage on every page (except your homepage).
6) Could do with a contact form instead of just the email link in the navigation.
7) The drop shadow effect doesn't look in your galleries as they're made for a white background.
8) The "Alandon" web design is a little large and stands out as it's on a white background, I hope they gave you a massive discount ;)
9) The XHTML compliant tick - who really cares?
10) The Lion Rampant animated flag is a bit "cheesy" on the Hogmany page.
Harrison's Discos
03-05-2007, 06:53 PM
Nice home page, but looks a bit cluttered. Yes i think the text is slightly hard to read with the lights picture in the background. Apart from that.. :approve:
edwin
04-05-2007, 03:18 PM
Er the validation link is good, except your page doesn't validate.
http://willsnet.hopto.org/images/validate.png
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