Web Site By a 15 yr old

[TLC]

Hi All, I am a 43 year old dj and good at what I do, but when it comes to web design, I am lost so a freinds son as done me the template. I have sent him the text to add But I was never any good at English Grammer etc.. Could you please help me fill in the pages with your suggestions on what to add or remove. Here is my website, Comments please.
www.tlcroadshow.com

[PropellerHeadCase]

Tell your web boffin to lose the frames :D

[TLC]

Ok will Do

[Corabar Steve]

Looks a very good starting point, not too much tweaking needed.

One point though, that I picked up on my cursory glance over the site. On the Karaoke page you say venues suitable for silver or gold package can have karaoke, on the disco page you only mention it for the gold. You don't mention anything less than silver, so do you offer karaoke for all venues you work? You can see this is a little confusing.

[TLC]

Thanks Steve so How should I word it In the karaoke page ?

[Shakermaker Promotions]

I think it looks ok for starters and better than mine at the moment. I'm gonna have to sit down and re-do the lot soon myself.

I noticed that 'Specialise' is spelt wrong...there is no Z in it but that's about it really.

[Corabar Steve]

Depends on if you do put it out with the silver package or not I suppose, either the disco of karaoke page will need changing. Either add something about karaoke to the silver package, or take silver off the karaoke page.

[TLC]

Thanks for the comments guys

[Marc J]

Tell your web boffin to lose the frames :D

I didn't see any frames??? Apart from the iframes for the off-site availability checker....which by the way isn't working, too many hits apparently (75 a month???).

Lose the flash navigation, it's not good to rely solely on a plugin for anything as critical as navigation. As it stands, most search engines won't get past your first page, and neither will people surfing at work with paranoid IT bosses who don't allow flash.

At the very least add alternative navigation, maybe in the footer, with HTML links.

[TLC]

I'm not too sure whats happened with the calender, I might have to upgrade it

[PropellerHeadCase]

I didn't see any frames??? Apart from the iframes for the off-site availability checker....which by the way isn't working, too many hits apparently (75 a month???).

Yeah, that was what I was referring to. When the page-loaded there was a big empty space in the middle - drop down properties said frames (ieframes, I think, actually), hence my comment.

[Corabar Entertainment]

I noticed that 'Specialise' is spelt wrong...there is no Z in it but that's about it really.'s' and 'z' are actually both acceptable ways to spell that :D