I really like it.
However...you're
Oxfordshire Wedding Disco so how come you don't have a dedicated page for weddings?
I guess I can understand that because it's a website dedicated to weddings the whole site is wedding-centric, but I still think you need a focal-point.
Your own pictures really are terrible, hopefully with the arrival of your new camera you should get some cracking pics.
I do think that some of the pages really are an "after-thought" and look totally unfinished. Take the Karaoke page for example; a nice stock image and just
31 words.
This is why I don't bother with separate pages for the services I offer, look at my "additional services" page ->
http://www.discofever.co.uk/additional-services/
Again, look at the Early setup page...a picture of you and your daughter and 26 words of text. Whilst it's a great pic, what has it got to do with early setup? In fact, what image could you use to describe early setup? If you can't think of one then don't bother, just put the early setup text on a dedicated weddings page.
Other than that, I really liked it.